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Tuesday, May 19

  1. page QueScott edited ... knew he would.He said he was going to write them monday.''I was just leaving'', I told her.'…
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    knew he would.He said he was going to write them monday.''I was just leaving'', I told her.''I have to meet somebody''.I'm always saying ''Glad to've met you'' to somebody im not at all glad i met.If you want to stay alive, you have to say that stuff, though.''How horrible...Dont darling. Please, don't. Not here.When I came back, she had the pillow off her head al right-I knew she wouldBut she still wouldn't look at me even though she was laying on her back.Daddy'll KILL YOU..! Boy, she really gets something on her mind when he gets something on her mind.''No,he wont. the worst he'll do, he'llwould.'ll give me
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    All Together Basically.Basically. If you
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Monday, December 13

  1. page creative writing edited Creative Writing Essay: I am a child of divorce I wonder if i was the cause of it all I hear ar…
    Creative Writing Essay:
    I am a child of divorce
    I wonder if i was the cause of it all
    I hear arguing and screaming
    I see fighting
    I want my parents to stay together
    I am a child of divorce
    I feel im the blame
    I touch broken glass
    I worry about what will happen next
    I cry when i hear all the yelling
    I am a child of divorce
    I understand nobody's perfect
    I dream of the picture perfect family
    Isay what my mom wants me to say at court
    I try not to upset my dad
    I hope we will become a loving family again someday
    I am a child of divorce

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    8:10 am

Monday, November 29

  1. page Elana Gov. edited ... and kept calling him a moron sonuvabitch I was so mad, I was practically bawling. Analysis:…
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    and kept calling him a moron sonuvabitch
    I was so mad, I was practically bawling.
    Analysis:
    Love can turn into an ugly situation that can leave each members bruised and broken and confused. Sometimes people that are the the closet to you can hurt you the most.

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    8:13 am

Wednesday, November 17

  1. page ShaniyaP edited ... I could hardly stop myself from sort of giving her a kiss on the top of her dopey head Sex is…
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    I could hardly stop myself from sort of giving her a kiss on the top of her dopey head
    Sex is something I just don't understand
    My words are chosen to express Holden's interest in sex. Even though Holden is a virgin he still has his eyes wide open to sex.
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    3:21 pm
  2. page Personal Introduction edited My name is Sianni Pugh. I want to go to college because I feel as though, to go as far as I want…

    My name is Sianni Pugh. I want to go to college because I feel as though, to go as far as I want to go , I need to go to college. Highschool education is not enough knowledge to become a Pediatrician. I need to study for a very long time. There are things that I don't know and in order to know them I need to go to college. Classes in college can teach me things I need to know. Like more about becoming a Pediatrician. The body, what's in it and how it works. Science overall is interesting to me. So college will help me explore other interesting aspects. I'm excited to go to college because it also shows responsibility.

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    9:54 am
  3. page Shaylah Campbell edited ... I don't know. Why? My reason for picking the line that I did are, I feel as if everyone wa…
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    I don't know.
    Why?
    My reason for picking the line that I did are, I feel as if everyone wants me to do them favors. Like they don't
    HI SHAY LOVE YA!
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    8:19 am
  4. page costalianna conway edited Get "Get your lousy ... off my chest Crumby bastard Shut chest" "Crumby bas…
    Get"Get your lousy
    ...
    off my chest
    Crumby bastard
    Shut
    chest"
    "Crumby bastard"
    "Shut
    up now!
    im
    now!"
    "im
    gonna slam ya one
    Willya
    one"
    "Willya
    keep your mouth shut?
    Why
    shut?"
    "Why
    the hell dontcha shut up?
    What
    up?"
    "What
    the hell happened to you?
    How
    you?"
    "How
    bout turning
    ...
    the goddam light!light!"
    "I wont abuse your goddam hospitality"
    "Just bastards!"
    The reason for me picking these quotes from the book shows the way Holden talks. The way he talks to people and the way he can't seem to pronounce his words correctly. Holden cant keep foul language of just mean things from coming out of his mouth.

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  5. page Elana Gov. edited Bruised Bruised Love A tiny bit of Light came through the shower curtains and all from our…
    Bruised
    Bruised
    Love
    A tiny bit of Light came through the shower curtains and all from our room,
    and I could see him lying in bed
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    8:17 am
  6. page Elana Gov. edited Bruised Love A tiny bit of Light came through the shower curtains and all from our room, and I …
    Bruised Love
    A tiny bit of Light came through the shower curtains and all from our room,
    and I could see him lying in bed
    It wasn't a beautiful view
    If i'm not mistaken
    I felt sorry as hell for him , all of a sudden
    I didn'T even bother to get up.
    I just lay there on the floor for a while
    and kept calling him a moron sonuvabitch
    I was so mad, I was practically bawling.

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    8:12 am
  7. page Shaylah Campbell edited ... I don't know. Why? ... SHAY LOVE YA YA!
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    I don't know.
    Why?
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    SHAY LOVE YAYA!
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    8:07 am

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